I wrote a blog this morning and sent it to Courtenay for editing. Here is her response when I called her to ask how the editing process was going:
“That is the worst blog you’ve ever written, and I’m not even done figuring out what you’re trying to say in the second paragraph, which comes after a run-on partial sentence/paragraph in the introduction. Plus, sometimes your parenthetical asides are more distracting than helpful.â€
“Okay, I’ll rewrite it.â€
“No, I’ll just rewrite the whole thing, if I can even figure out what you’re trying to say.â€
“It’s okay, I’m a better writer; I’ll do it myselfâ€
“Yeah, you’re a much better writer… ‘Blah blah incomplete sentence blah, I feel better, I thought everyone hated me, but they don’t, and by-the-way I want a new bike.’â€
Below is the long version of that synopsis (rewritten by Courtenay Brown):